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User: Can you suggest an improved version of this B1 student’s transcript?

Can you suggest an improved version of this B1 student’s transcript? There are two women and they are talking about a new sweater that one bought. One of the women said to the other that she likes a lot her new sweater and the other said that she bought it in the sales. The woman asked her how much it cost and the other said that if you WANT, you guessed the price. And the other thinks that the price maybe was 80 or 100. But the other are very happy and say that no, because they have 25%, so the final price was 67. And she thought that this sweater was a bargain.

Assistant: Here's an improved version of the student's transcript, with corrections based on a B1 level:

Here's an improved version of the student's transcript, with corrections based on a B1 level:

Two women are talking about a new sweater that one of them bought. One of the women says to the other that she really likes her new sweater, and the other replies that she bought it in the sales. The woman asks how much it cost, and the other says that if she wants, she can try to guess the price. The first woman guesses that it was maybe 80 or 100. But the other woman is very happy and says no, because there was a 25% discount, so the final price was 67. She thinks that the sweater was a bargain.

Here is a table with the errors and corrections:

| Error | Correction | | --------------------------------- | ----------------------------------- | | "there are two women" | "Two women are" | | "one of the women said" | "one of the women says" | | "likes a lot" | "really likes" | | "said that she bought" | "replies that she bought" | | "The woman asked her" | "The woman asks" | | "said that if you want" | "says that if she wants" | | "you guessed the price" | "she can try to guess the price" | | "thinks that the price maybe was" | "guesses that it was maybe" | | "But the other are very happy" | "But the other woman is very happy" | | "they have 25%" | "there was a 25% discount" | | "the final price was" | "the final price was 67" | | "she thought that this sweater" | "she thinks that the sweater" |

Notes:

• Use present tense more consistently for storytelling.
• Avoid repeating "the other" without specifying "woman" to make it clearer.
• Improve phrasing for clarity and natural expressions, like "likes a lot" to "really likes".