Editing How to Avoid Sentence Sprawl



Sentence sprawl occurs when a sentence is too long and includes too many ideas or clauses. This can make the sentence difficult to read and understand. Here are some tips to avoid sentence sprawl:

1. Keep your sentences short: Try to limit your sentences to no more than 15-20 words. Shorter sentences are generally easier to read and understand.

2. Use active voice: Active voice sentences are usually shorter and more concise than passive voice sentences.

3. Break up long sentences: If you find yourself writing a sentence that is too long, try breaking it up into smaller, more manageable sentences. Look for natural breaks in the sentence where you can insert a period or semicolon.

4. Avoid using too many conjunctions: Conjunctions such as "and," "but," and "or" can be helpful for connecting ideas, but using too many can make a sentence too long and convoluted.

5. Focus on one main idea: Each sentence should have one main idea or thought. Avoid trying to cram too many ideas into one sentence.

6. Use punctuation correctly: Proper use of punctuation can help you avoid sentence sprawl. Be sure to use commas, semicolons, and dashes correctly to help break up your sentences.

7. Read your writing out loud: Reading your writing out loud can help you identify sentences that are too long or difficult to understand. If you find yourself struggling to read a sentence out loud, it may be a sign that it needs to be revised.