Editing Openai/69231e78-5a78-8013-81a7-f2dd38762292 (section)

===== 1. Tighten repetition and phrasing - Certain points are repeated in slightly different words (e.g., the distinction between law vs. legalism, or self-regulation vs. imposed control). You could condense to maintain momentum: > =====
# Clarify the definition of “Unwritten Law” - You mention Unwritten Law a few times, but a short sentence defining it upfront in 2.5 would help anchor the reader: >
# Strengthen the hunter-gatherer connection - The transition in 2.8 could explicitly link the Free Market analogy to hunter-gatherer practices: >
# Optional: subtle caution about modern deviations - A brief note could reinforce your argument that these principles are often lost in modern systems: >
# Paragraph length and readability - Some paragraphs are long, particularly in 2.6–2.7. Breaking them into smaller chunks makes them easier to digest for readers encountering philosophical concepts for the first time.