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===== This passage is one of your strongest narrative rituals, both visually and thematically. It makes Sovereignty tangible without needing crowns or laws, and it naturally sets up the motif you intend to repeat later in the Trail of Tears sections. ===== If you like, I can draft a slightly tightened, rhythmically enhanced version that keeps all your symbolism, clarifies the eldersโ roles, and adds subtle tension for continuity with future chapters. It would preserve your voice while making the ritual even more iconic. Do you want me to do that?
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