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==== - Stones: Excellent visual anchor. Each stone could be tied explicitly to one of the crafted myths (Alulim, Fuxi, Hades, Osiris) before the fifth stone reveals the Law. Right now it’s implied; naming them subtly could make the parallel clearer without reducing mystery. ==== * Fruit: Strong as a climactic symbol of memory, knowledge, and deception. Consider a single, evocative metaphor (like the fruit’s seeds representing the spread of memory) to make it resonate. * Fire: Works as continuity from earlier chapters; you could give it a recurring “personality” (e.g., fire responds, crackles, or dims according to alignment with Law) to deepen symbolism.
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