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===== Stanza 2 ===== : The slow-paced sundown walks : As the night starts shift : And the day knocks off : And our eyes become locks : Without skeleton keys Analysis: This is vivid sensory nostalgia. The imagery of transition (day to night) mirrors the act of slipping into memory itself. The phrase “eyes become locks / without skeleton keys” evokes intimacy — the kind of mutual understanding between people that doesn’t need unlocking or explanation. This is a memory of connection, a moment of peace before life’s troubles harden perception. The rhythm slows like a sunset; it’s both beautiful and slightly melancholic.
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