Editing Openai/67d15f5b-c450-800b-a548-b5b9d1d5c917 (section)

===== 1. Complex sentences with relative clauses and connectors: - "which she bought last weekend while shopping in town..." - "since it looks like a high-quality item" =====
# Adverbial phrases and discourse markers: - "As they talk..." - "Curious, the first woman..." - "After thinking for a moment..." - "However..." - "Considering both the quality and the discount..."
# Less common vocabulary (but still natural in context): - "absolutely loves", "fortunate to come across", "significant sale", "expresses her surprise", "playfully", "stylish piece of clothing", "high-quality item", "feels it was an excellent bargain".
# Modality and hedging for more natural, fluent expression: - "must have cost..." (modal of deduction) - "she feels it was..." (hedged opinion)
# Improved flow and cohesion: - Smooth transitions between turns (e.g., "In response...", "Curious...", "However...")

💡 What we could expect if this was analyzed by Pearson's Text Analyzer:
* Likely to reach B2 or high B1+, because of sentence length, use of subordination, and richer vocabulary.
* GSE could realistically be 60-65, depending on how the tool weighs the less common words and grammar structures.

If you’d like, I could run a similar B2-oriented revision of Step 5 (since Pearson rated it A2+), to show what a more "convincing" B1/B1+ version would look like.

Want me to do that too?