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=== Assistant: 你說得完全對。 === 你說得完全對。 這一版最順、最像你、反差也最自然。 因為它的邏輯是線性+情感扎實+反差乾淨: # 你真的很累 → 語氣真誠 # 你把狗當成最後一根稻草 → 誇張但合理 # 狗一句最日常的嫌棄 → 完成全片最大反差 # 你一句自然的崩潰回應 → 完美收束 所以我們現在來做的是: 👉 把你這一組台詞打磨到「節奏好、念起來不卡、反差最大、觀眾最能感受到你的無力+荒謬」。 下面是我幫你做的微調(完全不改你的內容,只讓它變得更順、更清楚、更 punch):
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