Editing Openai/6938cb2a-5e58-8006-9cdc-18cc6bb64159 (section)

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# Original Sentence: Prophet Kanyari's personal assistant has taken to Facebook to urge the people who planned and oversaw the late musician's funeral to plan a meeting and ensure that the children get their fair Correction: Prophet Kanyari's personal assistant has taken to Facebook to urge the people who planned and oversaw the late musician's funeral to plan a meeting and ensure that the children get their fair share. Explanation: The word "fair" should be followed by "share" for clarity and grammatical correctness.
# Original Sentence: The man who has worked for Kanyari for many years has shared that he saw Kanyari in a very bad condition when his ex-wife died Correction: The man who has worked for Kanyari for many years has shared that he saw Kanyari in a very bad condition when his ex-wife passed away. Explanation: "Died" is a bit harsh in this context, and "passed away" is a more respectful term.
# Original Sentence: According to the man, pastors, prominent people, as well as Kanyari and Hiram Gitau aka Tash, should meet and prevent the matter from escalating on social media Correction: According to the man, pastors, prominent people, as well as Kanyari and Hiram Gitau, aka Tash, should meet and prevent the matter from escalating on social media. Explanation: The placement of "aka Tash" was slightly off. It should be set off by commas.
# Original Sentence: The PA was stunned when he saw Betty Bayo's brother come out and make allegations against her widower, identified as Tash and the situation at hand. Correction: The PA was stunned when he saw Betty Bayo's brother come out and make allegations against her widower, identified as Tash, and the situation at hand. Explanation: A comma is needed before "and" to separate the clauses properly.
# Original Sentence: I support Bettys brother for saying enough is enough, but I have one request to the funeral committee; you looked for money to give her a decent burial and to make sure that the kids don't suffer in the future, he said. Correction: I support Betty's brother for saying enough is enough, but I have one request for the funeral committee: you looked for money to give her a decent burial and to make sure that the kids don't suffer in the future, he said. Explanation: "Bettys" should have an apostrophe to show possession, and the semicolon should be replaced with a colon.
# Original Sentence: Kanyaris PA mentioned people like singers Ben Githae, Ngaruiya, Shiro Wa GP, Karangu Muraya and elder Kioni to meet his eminence Michael Wanderi, Mwangi Zakayo and Ben Kingei. Correction: Kanyari's PA mentioned people like singers Ben Githae, Ngaruiya, Shiro Wa GP, Karangu Muraya, and elder Kioni to meet His Eminence Michael Wanderi, Mwangi Zakayo, and Ben Kingei. Explanation: "Kanyaris" should be "Kanyari's" for possession, "His Eminence" should be capitalized as it's a title, and commas are needed before "and" in lists.
# Original Sentence: I am praying for the funds of the kids because there is what belongs to them if things continue that way they will not fall in a good place, he said. Correction: I am praying for the kids' funds because there is what belongs to them. If things continue that way, they will not end up in a good place, he said. Explanation: "The funds of the kids" is less natural than "the kids' funds," and "fall in a good place" is awkward; "end up in a good place" is more appropriate.
# Original Sentence: We will embarrass Betty and remain without clothes. Correction: We will embarrass Betty and remain without dignity. Explanation: "Without clothes" seems metaphorical but unclear. "Without dignity" is a clearer way of expressing the idea.
# Original Sentence: She has left her kids, and there are funds; more funds are on the way, but if the big people in society see the fighting among people for the sake of what belongs to them, they will run away. Correction: She has left her kids, and there are funds; more funds are on the way, but if the influential people in society see the fighting among people for what belongs to them, they will run away. Explanation: "Big people" is informal, and "influential people" fits better in this context.
# Original Sentence: We have handled a lot of things in this world. I respectfully you to plan a meeting. Correction: We have handled a lot of things in this world. I respectfully urge you to plan a meeting. Explanation: The word "respectfully" is followed by "urge" in this context, not "you."
# Original Sentence: It will go viral, and there will be a lot of humiliation, she said. Correction: It will go viral, and there will be a lot of humiliation, he said. Explanation: The speaker is referred to as a male in the text, so "he" should be used instead of "she."
# Original Sentence: I respect Wamumbi; you are a respected person, the committee should discuss the funds for the kids and ask about the properties that were left behind. Correction: I respect Wamumbi; you are a respected person. The committee should discuss the funds for the kids and inquire about the properties that were left behind. Explanation: "Ask about" is less formal than "inquire about," and a period is needed before the second sentence.
# Original Sentence: God didn't choose you to preside over the funeral so you can let things escalate to that point. Correction: God didn't choose you to preside over the funeral so that you can let things escalate to that point. Explanation: The phrase "so you can" is informal, and "so that" is more appropriate here.

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