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=== ## === 畫面: 靜止的公園草地,強烈日光,樹影鋪滿前景。 你的剪影佔畫面底部中間,呈現一種「沉默注視」的姿態。 遠方,一隻狗正攤平在陽光下,一動不動。 情緒:神聖、孤寂、詩意 對比法:情境對比(普通睡覺 → 你卻像在看神蹟) 台詞(口白 SET): 「哇…牠這光…不是一般的睡覺吧…?」 ==== 畫面: ==== 鏡頭微微往狗方向推,陽光在牠身上形成一圈淡淡的“背光光暈”。 草地紋理被拉得更細,狗睡得像在修行。 情緒:懸疑+荒謬的敬畏 招式:誇飾(把睡覺當神蹟) 台詞(心聲): 「這角度…牠根本在閉關修行。」 ==== 畫面: ==== 你的影子向前靠近一點,像是“對大師鞠躬” 但你本人仍在畫外 → 萬物皆你腦補。 情緒:過度投入 招式:觀點錯置(你在演宗教儀式) 台詞(TAG): 「牠是不是在傳什麼訊號…?」 ==== 畫面: ==== 狗突然只是換個睡姿(自然翻身), 但被你誤會成「神聖回應」。 陽光照到牠肚子,瞬間更像“被光選中的存在”。 情緒:懸疑被加倍放大 招式:誤會情境 / 反差萌 小反轉:狗翻身 → 你截然誤會 台詞(TAG): 「牠在指點我!牠真的在指點我!」
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